Friday, August 26, 2016

The Agape Love Comments

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I gave my son the best things of this world freely
But he went to labour for the least things of life
I showed my beloved the purest of love
But he preferred the hate of the world
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David Elliot Toju
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Kelly Kurt 27 August 2016

I assume English is a second language. That being the case, you did a wonderful job, Elliot

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Pawan Meena 26 August 2016

Your beloved is very ignorious to this world Nice poem

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elliot toju 26 August 2016

I think it is great and awesome though I feel that I need to work on some stuff. what do you think?

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David Elliot Toju

David Elliot Toju

lagos, nigeria
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