Tuesday, July 5, 2011

The Alligator Pear Comments

Rating: 5.0

The alligator pear is rough outside but smooth and soft and green inside,
All of which lets us discover that you can't tell an avocado by its cover.
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Norm Milstein
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 05 July 2011

It was really a great poem written well with nice texture and imagery. Quite descriptive yet interesting. You have done a great job. Well done. Keep on writing. I rated it 10. Please read and rate my poem 'Abortion' on page 4. Warmest regards Akmal

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