Wednesday, June 12, 2013

The Beautiful Ones Are Not Yet Born Comments

Rating: 4.5

My lover left me
for my boss who drives a Mercedes.
Here I sat in silence
loaded with sadness;
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Chika Nwokeoma
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Chinedu Dike 29 December 2014

A lovely train of thoughts, well encapsulated into a nice poem. The title reminds me of one of the novels written by a prominent African writer. Indeed THE BEAUTIFUL ONES ARE NOT YET BORN. I like the articulation of the poem as it captured the conviction of the poet. A nice one Chika, keep it up and thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Gajanan Mishra 12 June 2013

beautiful one not yet born, But we all are here in this world are beautiful. see and feel. anyway, good poem. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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Chika Nwokeoma

Chika Nwokeoma

Imo State, Nigeria
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