Tuesday, November 13, 2007

The Beginning Comments

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In the beginning she knew…
then she ignored it…
and now she realized she could no longer deny,
she admitted once and for all
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Carol Smith
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Goldy Locks 13 November 2007

Beginning meets the end meets the beginning. Vicious circle. Caught in a tragic undertow. Told with composure, care, and with the eyes & heart of someone who's been there (or has the wisdom to see from afar) ... and that's what it's about. ~ sjg

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Eastlandah David 13 November 2007

This is really touching. What of with all these incidences of inrequitted love? I know better. even better with this poem. Thanks for the beautifull lines.

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