The Best Poem by Victoria Walker

The Best

Rating: 5.0


God saw that you were suffering,
And there was no cure to be.
So He took you in His caring hands,
And whispered 'Come to me.'

With tearful eyes I watched you,
And I saw you pass away.
But although I love you dearly,
I could not make you stay.

A golden heart stopped beating,
Hard working hands at rest.
God broke my heart to prove to me,
He only takes the best.

Monday, January 5, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: caring
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Amy Walker 26 January 2009

its very movin hun ur a natural sis i love ya loads i nearly cried bab xx

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Cory Jensen 05 January 2009

i wanted to cry! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Oh my gosh! ! ! ! how sweet and sad all in one! Its wonderful! its so amazing...its better then the other one I read! Its simply...wow......I'm keeping updated with the poems you write!

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