Friday, February 17, 2006

The Blood Comments

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Gifts from our Mother;
Womb, seed and blood
The eternal jewels of creation
And the plentiful cup of knowing.
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Albert Wong 03 September 2009

There're a lot of blood besides your mom's womb. For xample: We, the Chinese people said their's are dragoon's blood. So, they are the dragoon's successors. Your description is too clear to say simply from mom. Do you remember the western poetry was like the fog (dreaming style) . Too clear in a poem is not a style in the Western poetry.

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