Saturday, March 12, 2016

The Butterfly Comments

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Green meadows
Wind blows
Leaves scatter
Flowers flitter
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Susan Williams 10 May 2016

I enjoyed this. I like how you structured it and I liked the images- - - - ] Green meadows Wind blows Leaves scatter Flowers flitter and I found myself smiling at the lowly caterpillar breaking loose... - - - ]No space No face Hiding until It'll unseal. There's a special grace and delight that shines through this poem.

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