Wednesday, January 30, 2008

The Calling Comments

Rating: 4.8

By the sea she sits
Gazing longingly for its embrace
Its touch and caress
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Wade Bouton
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Krista Shepard 06 January 2010

Very nice! I like the descriptions of the waves, it seems so alive and real. The ending is so relieving- I feel like the character, a sense of cleansing, rinsed of all the trouble and ready to go back into the world.

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