Wednesday, June 17, 2015

The Closing Act Comments

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I do believe
that when my time comes
to take the final bow
my heel will become caught
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Gina Teel
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Daniel Brick 14 July 2015

At first I thought this would be a dour poem - and also scary because the speaker is contemplating her own imminent death. But having set a stage set for high seriousness, you nimbly pull the rug from under our feet, and we tumble just like you figure. Why not just laugh it off? We are serious about so much, why not look for the laughter lining as you guide us to a different perspective - flexible, generous, delightful.

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Gina Teel

Gina Teel

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