Wednesday, November 23, 2016

The Dance Comments

Rating: 4.5

I brace myself for
Pain,
As the inevitable dance begins
Again,
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Gill O'Neill
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Kim Barney 24 November 2016

Gill, welcome to Poem Hunter. This poem appears to be the first that you have posted on this site. Congratulations on a good start. Looking forward to reading many more of your poems in the future! I like all the dance terms you used in the poem to go along with your title: two-step pas de deux jig tango Well done!

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Menato San 24 November 2016

Amazing poem.thanks for sharing with us

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Sister Frances 23 November 2016

A very clever poem...great use of metaphor dancing. It can look so beautiful and effortless when you have a partner and he's in syncs with your movements. Keep sharing

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