Sunday, October 26, 2008
The Dancer Dances! Comments
Rating: ★4.8
As the smoke drifts in the shadows
Quiet now with bolted doors
No more crowds – just empty tables
Round the dark and silent floor
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Francesca Johnson
26 October 2008
Wonderful stuff. There's a whole gamut of images and emotions in this piece. This is the second of yours I have read and I'm sure I will read more. Excellent, David. Love, Fran xx
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2/27/2026 4:31:59 PM # 1.0.0
Great use of imagry and rhyme...Also a little pathos... Sounds like the aftermath Of an otherwise happy event, only the shadows of an uneasy spirit left to haunt... Sid.