rose red

The Darkness - Poem by rose red

the darkness
filling my senses
as i wander alone
wondering why
i did what i did
and how
i stooped so low
as to hurt
the one
i most care for
how could i have done it
how could i
have not even cared
why o why
am i like this
have i lost
all my humanity

Comments about The Darkness by rose red

  • (5/17/2010 10:11:00 PM)

    I like your use of line breaks it adds a cool effect to the poem my favourite being when you say:

    have i lost
    all my humanity

    good stuff.
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, February 10, 2010

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