The Darkness Poem by rose red

The Darkness



the darkness
filling my senses
as i wander alone
wondering why
i did what i did
and how
i stooped so low
as to hurt
the one
i most care for
how could i have done it
how could i
have not even cared
why o why
am i like this
have i lost
all my humanity

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Brandon Nothing 17 May 2010

I like your use of line breaks it adds a cool effect to the poem my favourite being when you say: have i lost all my humanity good stuff.

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