Tuesday, February 6, 2018

The Daughter Comments

Rating: 5.0

Born with a silver spoon
She grew up listening to the stories of the moon
To which she swooned swooned and swooned!
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Shalini Punjabi
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Dr Antony Theodore 10 June 2020

Life was full of vibrant hues Surroundings always kept her enthused Sorrows she had never met Hence there was nothing to fret.......Life had betrayed but she did not sway.... powerful determination...... t ony

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Jazib Kamalvi 29 February 2020

Such a nice poem, Shalini. Read my poem, Love and L u s t. Thanks.

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Dr Antony Theodore 04 March 2018

She saw the evils of the world hand in glove She had everything but love..... at the end life' experiences teaches us to be humble.........life is a mystery. the events of life too....... very well potrayed........ thank you dear poetess. tony

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Manishi 08 February 2018

Awesome Every daughter will be able to connect with it. Beautifully crafted.

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Gajanan Mishra 06 February 2018

life, vibrant hues, true

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