Monday, March 22, 2010

The Day You Left Comments

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The day you left,
Made a flashback to when we met.
In the park,
After dark.
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jasmine Johnson
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Gerald Sedillo 22 March 2010

Unalloyed love... maybe using imagery not directly connected to relate the other image and a departure from AABB rhyme schemes can help your poetry grow.

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