The Day You Left Poem by jasmine Johnson

The Day You Left

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The day you left,
Made a flashback to when we met.
In the park,
After dark.

The day you left,
Is when I sat on our favorite bench.
I remembered our first kiss,
That’s what I’ll miss.

The day you left,
Made me a mess.
I cried and cried,
You were my first good-bye.

The day you left,
November 25th.
Our last kiss,
I’m glad you shown me what love is.

Monday, March 22, 2010
Topic(s) of this poem: november,kiss
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gerald Sedillo 22 March 2010

Unalloyed love... maybe using imagery not directly connected to relate the other image and a departure from AABB rhyme schemes can help your poetry grow.

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