Tuesday, August 22, 2017

The Den`s Dawn Comments

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Den`s dawn

The smoke filled pub Curtains
could not shut out the light
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Jan Oskar Hansen
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Upendra Upm 22 August 2017

We should live life like the planet does, in a perfectly expected, predictable manner.,24 hours rotation.six seasons, Some people mess up by overliving ..Your poem is a superb description of dawn time bar scenes.Loneliness will not leave., cleaner killing yesterday are pertinent observations.

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