The Distant Goal Poem by Jesse Overton

The Distant Goal

Rating: 5.0


I search across the field of opportunity
My goals are in plain view
I try to reach out and grab them
They slip from grasp
I'm on a tight rope
One wrong move I'll fall
The closer I get, the more problems I face
I can taste the victory when I reach the end
I also taste defeat when my plans crumble from beneath
It's a work in progress
My motives still go strong
I incourage you to join me and reach for the stars

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Amy Douglass (Fifita) 02 June 2009

Very realistic. I like how you said that you can fail (I'm a very pessimistic person) , but that you can achieve. Not cheesey at all, well presented and passionate about life. Awesome write 10++

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