Friday, December 3, 2010

The Dream In My Heart Comments

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I once had a heart that had many beats...
My heart skipped a beat at the sound of your voice
My heart skipped a beat with the tune of your choice
My feelings grew hurt, now I know who you are
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Khairul Ahsan 29 October 2015

A beautiful poem. Liked it. 'My heart skipped a beat at the sound of your voice My heart skipped a beat with the tune of your choice' - So nice at the beginning, but so sad at the end!

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Miriam Mendez 05 December 2010

I really liked your poem. It has great meaning. I hope you post more of your poems on here. You have great talent. Thank you for your comment on my poem.

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