The Dreamer Poem by John Pap

The Dreamer

Rating: 5.0


Through the sky i find myself crying
but it's just a dream, so lucid and clear

I'm begging the angels to bring me to you,
but a wet heavy cloud spreads the darknes right through

I need to fight back to take my own stand
I need you right here does anyone hear?

I don't even mind, i open my mind
the nightmare has gone but it took so long..

now look in my eyes, what can you see?
I miss you, I love you, you set my soul free.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
John Papadimi 04 April 2012

thank you very much i really appreciate your opinion it's my first time writing a poem..and i think i m gonna conntinue doing this! !

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 03 April 2012

'....now look in my eyes, what can you see? ...' Poets eyes are noetic [psychic] oxyopia [acute vision] and you've shown it...excellent crafting...thanks for sharing...10++ ~ niv Please comment on my 'Why Hack My She'

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