Sunday, December 29, 2013

The Empty Spot Comments

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The empty spots still empty
a big hole he left behind
only tears and heartache
fill it now
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Clara Keiper
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Adeline Foster 26 July 2014

This is so well written that I am surprised that I didn't write it for that is just the way I felt way back in '58. Read mine - O Dearest Love - Adeline

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Loyd C Taylor Sr 29 December 2013

Good poem, well written, the black hole of aloneness I enjoyed, Loyd

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Clara Keiper

Clara Keiper

Niagara Falls, NY
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