londiwe buthelezi
The End
can't believe i didn't notice
that we were both drawing apart,
i'd always thought that i would love you
from the bottom of my heart.
now i've forgotten our first kiss,
can't remember our first time,
i wonder if you even cared,
or there was someone else in line
don't ask me when this happened,
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poemI really like this poem. I believe this happens to alot of people, but you just have to see if your relationship is Fire_Proof!
very to the point fine writing very real but also sad but also true bruce
A sad and sensitive piece, as yours so often are. Have you thought about putting more of this in rhyme? Might help you establish the mood even better.
oh i absolutly love this poem graet job please let me know when you wright more i would love to read your new work
Ppl say goodbye every second scary that the next second mite b ur turn LOVE IT! ! ! 10+++
I think that love is good when you have it. Maybe because you have forgotten that you are ready for a new. Take your life lessons and keep them close to your heart. Never give up and you will find your true happiness.
Good write, sometimes things don't turn out as we hope, keep writing. Lynda xx 10
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10/24/2021 5:52:52 PM # 1.0.0.738
wow! I felt a lot of emotion in that, well done Londiwe, brilliant xx