The Explanation Poem by I.P. GOPIKRISHNAN PISHARODY

The Explanation



He took my order,
I noticed the last bird had gone;
but my order, not yet come.
I see the ice dropp on glass,
slides in glass.
he gave me a friendship,
I wave with my eyes,
it goes down and down
Where it alter to water,
As the life is getting lose in an bit

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sid John Gardner. 25 April 2007

A nice idea Gopikrishnan. I am enthralled by the idea of ice melting in a glass where it changes its form. Everything changes form in life. The romantic touch compliments the analogy.Well done. Sid John.

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