He took my order,
I noticed the last bird had gone;
but my order, not yet come.
I see the ice dropp on glass,
slides in glass.
he gave me a friendship,
I wave with my eyes,
it goes down and down
Where it alter to water,
As the life is getting lose in an bit
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A nice idea Gopikrishnan. I am enthralled by the idea of ice melting in a glass where it changes its form. Everything changes form in life. The romantic touch compliments the analogy.Well done. Sid John.