Wednesday, July 6, 2011

The Farmer Comments

Rating: 5.0

Palms that feel like stone
Hard and rough with yellow calluses:
From morn til dusk
It reigns the plow
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 06 July 2011

It was really a great poem written well with nice texture and imagery. Quite descriptive yet interesting. You have done a great job. Well done. Keep on writing. I rated it 10. Please read and rate my poem 'A farmer' on page. Warmest regards Akmal

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