Saturday, May 5, 2018

The Final Act Comments

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The hands have vanished.
The puppets strewn carelessly,
laying about, sleeping,
as puppets are lazy when
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Brian Rihlmann
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Jazib Kamalvi 31 July 2018

A good start with a nice poem, Brian R. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Dr Antony Theodore 05 May 2018

as puppets are lazy when no one is pulling their strings. ropes, space, nooses, smiling, laughing, .... a picture of society. your observation is so powerful. it is one of the greatest gifts of a poet.. the power of observation...... thank u dear poet for this poem. tony

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