Thursday, April 30, 2009

The Final Breath Comments

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You look at your past.
Think of your mistakes.
Think of your future.
Your such a disgrace.
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Ashley Jean S
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Angela L Burke 30 April 2009

I like this very much :) simple and to the point but gut wrenching, just like I like it (poetry that is) ...good job :)

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Colin J... 30 April 2009

To late for him/her... Good poem... Colin J... Hope to see more...

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