The First Song I Ever Wrote............. Poem by taylor marie

The First Song I Ever Wrote.............



you told me you loved me
you told me you cared
all i heard was just one word

its never gonna happen
thats not how i felt
the pain you delt
was just another heart break

i cant understand
why you left and why you lied
you could have told me how you felt
instead of lying and making me feel bad

i cant live
in this lie
i'm struggling just to survive

i want to love
i wanna live
but i cant do that
when all you do is cause me pain
and make it rain

i cant live this way
i wish you would take it back
i wish i could hit rewind
and cancel out this love

this love
driving me crazy

this love
making me die

this love
hurting me

you dont know how i am
so forget it all just like me
forget it all and leave me be

ill drown in my tears
ill live this lie
ill say i hate you
when it all goes down
i hope i end up happy
i hope i can love
i hope you will be in my life again as mine

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kay Connolly 22 October 2009

The best writings come from the heart, I'm in tune with this one. It's wonderful, great job at putting words to your feelings.10+

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