The First Time Ever Poem by Louise Tredoux

The First Time Ever

Rating: 4.5


I felt myself growing against you
I felt you growing against me
it came so naturally
all separations removed spontaneously
growing together
unexpectedly moving together
the first time ever
moulded into one
my mind still residing
in yours, I’m living
behind your eyes

Tuesday, May 20, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: together
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 23 May 2008

hey louise, your descriptions are highly intense. i can feel it.good write.

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