Thursday, July 17, 2008

The Forrest Comments

Rating: 5.0

Is the greenest one
You could ever see
Laden with fruit
And promises
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Varun Batra 16 December 2008

On the outside Her loneliness died It was on her side Pretty and ribbon-tied Adventure now couldn’t hide She has keeled over and died. So amazinggggggg

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Dr.subhendu Kar 26 July 2008

the light stll burns deep blue the remniscencve never bereft of green grin when once raved up yet flows in hide that always reason true and ever glimmering.....................yet luscious green by ingenuity, lucidity yet ripples across the chilled pine tree of the forest, well penned,10+, thanks for sharing

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