The Fountain Poem by John Kipling Lewis
The Fountain
Rating: ★3.9
the fountain railing holds back
the children from a pool of
water that has a siren's call
the children want to play inside, under.
the pool is certain death.
in my minds eye,
i see the fountain without the rail
Wednesday, March 1, 2006
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Kath Moore
05 November 2007
8. The first part is great. Sustain those concrete, original images. 'Mind's eye' is cliched.
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4/25/2024 12:20:00 PM # 1.0.0.1119
It's good but I think the words could use a little reworking.