Wednesday, August 5, 2009

The Garden Party Comments

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They streamed in
like creepers curling
round a great tree trunk
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James Hart
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Cj Heck 05 August 2009

Very nice, James. Good use of imagery. Interesting disclosure of the main theme in final stanza. Excellent. Warmest regards, CJ Heck

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Grappenhall, Cheshire
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