The Gates Of Innocence Poem by jim hogg

The Gates Of Innocence



Up round St John Street we walked one night,
while moonlight brightly glowed,
my arm around you, yours round me,
with two friends long ago,
so deep into love's old sweet dream
in moments now long flown,
and like a leaf upon the breeze
my heart was not my own.

Oh the road to winning you was fraught,
with quicksands all the way.
I sank and swam, I walked and ran,
I wooed you night and day,
to simply hold your hand so soft,
or gaze on eyes so blue,
in steep green fields at Clachanmore
when I worked next to you.

But no moon nor love could quite foresee
that I would wriggle free,
against my heart, against my will,
somewhat regretfully.
The roads we walked were soon to part,
to sever us for ill,
to leave the Crescent we once walked,
to ghosts that haunt me still.

And the thoughts that circle round me here,
all strengthen with the night.
as if the years have fallen to
that young love's breathless might;
your eyes beguiled the doubting stars
and left me void of sense,
before the moments we fell through
the gates of innocence.

Now the moonlight shines less brightly
on the lonely fields we cleared,
and St John Street is not as sweet
as when I held you, dear.
The friends we walked with on that night
still walk together yet
and their full moon's promise holds as true,
as when we two last met.


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Wednesday, December 7, 2011
Topic(s) of this poem: romance
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The moon glowed huge and bright in a completely clear sky over St John Street, Stranraer on Saturday night 7th August 1971. Four of us had walked down from the Town Hall to get a taxi. Fee was peeing in a doorway and saying 'no metter how often ye shak yer peg, there's aye a drap rins doon yer leg'.. how true..! Barbara was waiting for Fee, and **** and I stood nearby, in each other's arms. It was close on midnight, and almost as bright as day. Barbara quoted an ancient local saying, which went "a full moon on a saturday night means you're in love with whoever you're with! ". Must be true from time to time. I'd pursued **** for years but she'd kept me guessing most of the time - though we'd spent plenty of the sweetest hours together - then suddenly, the lights were at full on green.... but I blew it and then some - circumstances stopped me from making the next date...causing me to take a major huff.. I played the martyr to punish the world, and though we talked often in, and outside, the shop where she worked, exchanged letters, and met once more 'on Hamilton Road'- when I fluffed my lines really badly - we never dated again, though she turns up in the occasional scribble on these pages.
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