Wednesday, June 3, 2015

The Girlfriend Of My Friend Comments

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Saturday noon I drove my car to her house.
Seeing the doors open my eyebrows were all aroused.
I began to curse Jai who told me
“Samit look after my girlfriend while I’m out of town”
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Kunal Rathod
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Chinedu Dike 03 June 2015

Nice narrative poem, well articulated and nicely penned. Love is a spiritual experience that affects all and sundry profoundly. It's whimsical and temperamental, coming unannounced and may leave without warning. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Kunal Rathod 03 June 2015

Thank you Chinedu Dike. Sure I'll :)

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