Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Friday, August 2, 2013

The Golden Days Are Over Comments

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The golden days are over
I have lost the beautiful cover
She has left house in huff
Her attitude was very tough
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Heather Wilkins 03 August 2013

this is a good write proving the value of the woman in a mans life. your last stanza is nice. enjoyed the read

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 02 August 2013

I enjoy reading this poem River Brawn11 minutes ago I this alot, good job!

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Geetha Jayakumar 02 August 2013

Stand by in critical time and inspire him to look forward...Very beautiful poem and loved reading it... I seek your Blessings on my completion of 100 poems..Thank you.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 02 August 2013

The golden days are over I have lost the beautiful cover

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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