Thursday, March 16, 2006

The Golden Touch Comments

Rating: 5.0

My heart turned to stone
As my soul burns to ash
An angel's golden touch
This life starts to flash
...
Read full text

King Midas
COMMENTS
merc gabriell 17 March 2006

you have written a golden poem, king midas. the message of lost love and its ache carries me away. if i may suggest, retype the poem to correct the typo errors that sort of distract. i hope you don't mind my suggesting it. the poem is just too beautiful in its love and pain. a royalty. like you. sincerely, merc

3 0 Reply
King Midas

King Midas

Dallas, Texas
Close
Error Success