The Green Man Comments

PoetrySoup 'Your way with weaving words is so creative and artistic. With an evocative touch flowing throughout your lines. I absolutely love the lines " walkways, camouflaged in an every-day of solitude; " soul stirring! So well articulated and delivered! Pleasure reading this'

I put this on PoetrySoup here's a comment 'I love the word play in your poem, Clive, along with the subtle imagery. I especially liked 'camouflaged in an every-day solitude.' It created such a visual and added a tone to your poem.'