ismael subba

Rookie - 424 Points (12 may / India)

The Half Bottle - Poem by ismael subba

A kid kicks a half filled bottle... It passes by a blind poet thinking about humanity.... He imagines The half filled bottle human brain.... make sounds a lot though half filled.... or if its empty.. but never creates grumpy irritating voice when its full... Humans can only make sounds.... shout louder create voices like the half filled bottle.... the bottle goes to the direction kicked In the same way human minds travels where it is led by hollow words.. the kid laughs at bottle.... along with him laughs poet...

Form: Prose Poem


Comments about The Half Bottle by ismael subba

  • Ismael Subba (9/3/2015 3:45:00 PM)


    thankyou mohammad ji for inspiring review (Report) Reply

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  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (9/2/2015 1:47:00 PM)


    Nicely written......I liked it.
    If u find time please review my poems.
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, September 2, 2015



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