The Hatred Poem by michael plumb

The Hatred



you start the gore
blood flows on the shore
to fight is no more
but words will reflect on your soul.

the place where I should be
you just grabbed it suddenly
smirched my image,
ripped me into the pieces.

I am alone but you are many
together with your ancestry
made a ploy successively
and thought it was your victory

My time will come
your life will be gruesome
offspring will not lasts
and you will suffer the grudge.

- babylin palonpon

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nerissa Hedlind 20 August 2008

Oh well, writing is the reflection of you.

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Michael Plumb 17 August 2008

it has nothing to do with envy only a dolt will think such way. it has something to do with my country, some guilty will base on the shallow meaning of it. Its really shallow if you don't use your comprehension.

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Nerissa Hedlind 15 August 2008

I think you have too many 'hate' in your heart, it could be rooted by the word 'envy'.

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Nerissa Hedlind 14 August 2008

is this something to do with revenge?

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