Tuesday, March 10, 2015

The Heart's Desire Comments

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Oh, the heart that drives the soul,
Never knowing when to stop or go,
Although, while its limits are sometime known,
Like a bird that just has flown,
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Chinedu Dike 10 March 2015

A sonorous poem, well articulated and nicely penned. The divine function of the heart is to love. Love is spiritual and affects all and sundry profoundly, however, it's also whimsical and temperamental, coming unannounced and may leave without warning. A good piece of poetry with lovely rhyme scheme. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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