Wednesday, January 11, 2006

The Heaven Of Atheists (An Echo Of James Dickey’s “the Heaven Of Animals”) Comments

Rating: 4.5

Here they are. The cynical eyes open.
If they have lived in a city
It is a city.
If they have lived in the suburbs
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Scott Alten
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Sorry bout my rating, but I feel people give away 10's far too easily. The poem was good, however you'd have to do better to earn a 10 from me. Free verse or half rhyme is far too easy to write in, although it can be done well. Just try to work on the flow of the poem, make it feel like each line is supposed to lead to the next.

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