Friday, February 26, 2016

The Home Within Comments

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I have a home,
so small and tiny,
but can take non but you,
the place i called home within.
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Naih Garang
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Dr Antony Theodore 29 March 2016

My loving heart, is your home within, Kept clean, not bleeding, But tight like a tin. no sin, no bleeding, kept within, my heart is your home............... within. lovely poem. it is in its simplicity, so clear and fine. th ank you dear poet. tony

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Rajnish Manga 26 February 2016

My loving heart, is your home within, Home within, is where you belong, ...../ So beautiful and an amazing place to live in. Thanks.

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G N Peter Akol 26 February 2016

You are welcome.......... i wrote this when i was lonely thinking of the one i love.

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Naih Garang

Naih Garang

Anyidi village South Sudan
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