The Horrid Are Left Poem by Bob Sujdak

The Horrid Are Left

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a fluttering feeling passes through her
the light creeps away
the darkness seeps in
a beauty forgotten

a faint beat ceases
demons swoop in
angels overpower
a kind heart overtaken

an evil is no more
the heavenly leave him
the demons come in
his screams are unbearable, and then..... scilence

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Brittany graviet 14 September 2008

oh wow! very nice, very nice. very depressing but beautifully put! i love how you described the darkness over taking her/him? I was a little confused by the fact that you started out with a girl and ended up with a boy though.

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