Bob Sujdak

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Crows Wing, Crowned King - Poem by Bob Sujdak

as the time flew by on a black crows wing,
i thought about every single thing,
but without the girl there,
this time meant nothing

the smiles that i showed,
the laughs that we shared,
all gone,
she left me impared

then the other came along,
and all the pain was gone

we smiled,
we laughed,
no matter the distance,
the hole in my heart was filled,
no need for my defensive stance

but of course,
it didnt last,
she left,
he weeped,
she continued,
he wanted an end,
and alas,
he made one


Comments about Crows Wing, Crowned King by Bob Sujdak

  • Abderrahmane Dakir (3/8/2016 11:05:00 AM)

    Nice poem but our God is one if you keep in touch with Him. Your hole will be filled forever. Thank you for sharing. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, March 10, 2009

Poem Edited: Monday, March 30, 2009


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