' The Hourglass Impression... Poem by Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr

' The Hourglass Impression...

Rating: 5.0


A Senryu Verse, but with the
employment of the syllabic re-
quirement of Traditional Haiku.


Why Can't Sand Replace

The Rude Tick-Tock of Clocks,

More Than Three Minutes? !




FjR-MMXVI

Wednesday, August 24, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: senryu,sound
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Robert Cardozza 02 September 2016

clever senryu. your style is to be applauded and lauded.

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr

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