The Ice That Breaks Me Poem by Star Crossed Lady

The Ice That Breaks Me

Rating: 3.0


Ice blue eyes,
Look at me.
Don't let him hear my cries,
Don't let him see.
My heart starts breaking,
As I fade away.
My heart stops beating,
And I start to decay.
Yet my thoughts are not for me,
But for him.
I cant stand to see,
The tears that start to swim.
What hurts me more than my death,
What steals away my very breath.
Is the tears in his Ice Blue eyes,
The agony I hear in his cries.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jeri Martindale 21 January 2014

Love this. You are a great writer. I say write about what inspires u. Sometimes death isn't actual death...

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Guess Who 24 December 2012

very touching, moving poem....... Sometimes fear of not being accepted can cause bad emotions....... like the flow of your poem very beautiful description........ you are talented.......... (Don't talk alot about death it's a very dark subject) ...... Keep it up: GuessWho

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