The Imperfect Man Poem by hale shine

The Imperfect Man

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I am short and average looking
My eyes squint, vision is dull
I have dry skin which creases with age
My hair which grows slanted like a roof

I am a failure again and again
My vitality is moderate at best most days
I have many a grand idea
but not many great doings

I wake up late and drool in bed
I have poor eating habits
I don't feel hungry at the best of times
I sleep poorly

I ruminate too much
I am not great at loving myself or another
I cry a cry without tears
I think melancholy is the happiness of being sad.

I am the imperfect man
You, Me, Him, Her.

Monday, September 4, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: blue,failure,life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rini Shibu 04 September 2017

Well written poem on one's imperfections

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