Tuesday, June 12, 2012

The Indifferent Sun Comments

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After the centuries, the sun
Behind the green willow trees
On the bank of a running brook
Appeared before me
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Showkat Ahmad Bhat
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Tawfeeq Illahi 13 January 2016

sir,you have now resumed to be hassan zaingeri,very hard to recognise this.

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Joseph Poewhit 12 June 2012

Dreams fall apart in life, as people.

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Erika Michelle 12 June 2012

This was beautiful. I love the vocabulary, it's hard to find something with long words these days! ! It was a fantastic read and I encourage you to continue in this line of poetry, nature is something beautiful and you can always find something to write about her, (:

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