Saturday, June 25, 2011

The Lady With The Fringe Comments

Rating: 5.0

I own this page and I possess its turf,
So I shall divulge that:
I corresponded on our inconsequential flirtations,
And his sporadic reappearances when his pond was parched.
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Rifhan Miller
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 25 June 2011

Great poem. I loved the way you described the whole thing. The poem was written well with nice texture and imagery. I rated it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Best regards Akmal

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