The Last Journey Poem by Laurie hill

The Last Journey

Rating: 5.0


May the stars light your path into heaven,
May the breeze play a soft lullaby.
There to sleep with the memories that you cherish,
in the peace of the sweet bye and bye

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

I am writing this comment out first on blue paper with clouds and as I write I can imagine the stars and feel the breeze playing a lullaby. (I turned the paper the wrong way in the printer, when I was printing a poem for a friend) . It is such a sweet poem Laurie and leaves such beautiful images behind....10 love Karin

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Goran Gustafsson 24 May 2009

It says it all in such a few beautiful words.

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Shirley Anne Alexander 07 February 2009

Sounds like a beautiful Irish blessing. Lovely.

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Chuck Petz 31 January 2009

Sensitive, well crafted, poignant, terse, and simply beautiful.

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