The Line Poem by some info is not ment to be known

The Line

Rating: 4.5


In between the line
There’s chaos, unseen wonders

The side of life,
Not what was hoped for
Desolation, obliteration
Rejection, arrogance
Fraudulent, disgraceful

The side of death
Not as bad as it appears
New beginning, new life
Comfort, home
Love, wanted

The line between life and death,

The act of shedding the old to reveal the new.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Roger Bowman 16 December 2006

I agree with Tibby.Cool poemo Roger

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Tibby Dames 15 December 2006

I just read all of your poems, and I like this one the best. Actually, to be honest, it came pretty close with 'She's Gone'. If you asked me why I like it so much, then I truthfully wouldn't have an answer. You'll just have to trust me when I saw it's awesome. Peace out from the girlie scout, Tibby

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