The Lobby Poem by Jon Parr

The Lobby

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Walking into the room seeing her smooth body
Every single inch whispers for my touch
Walking past you with lust, passing the lobby
Passing you know temptation is to much

The passion that occurs together
Like the Rhythmic rocking of a big boat
It is better than the worlds freak weather
And yes I will proceed to start to gloat

And with this addiction things become more real
Time after time I get worse, it's a curse
And of course I can't, not want to go and feel
Violent lips collide becoming even worse

So now you have heard my story of lust
So now her and I will begin to bust

Friday, May 6, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: addiction,lust,passion,weather
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 06 May 2016

And with this addiction things become more real Time after time I get worse, it's a curse And of course I can't, not want to go and feel Violent lips collide becoming even worse........passion, danger, character problem. play thing of devil..... so many things came into my thoughts..... thank you very much for this poem. dear poet... spiritual life.......? ? God calls. tony

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Jon Parr 23 March 2017

sorry for taking so long to reply kinda forgot about the poem thank you for the feedback and i'm glad you enjoyed it.

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